Rating: 5.0/5

~FRAZZLED~

GOING UP, GOING DOWN..........

Once a smile, now a frown
This method of insanity
Has ripped away most hope from me

GOING UP, GOING DOWN..........

Can't hide the pain, nor let it drown
Ravaged heart with complexity
A sacrifice... Joy kept from me

GOING UP, GOING DOWN..........

This broken spirit yearns to bear the crown
Emotions racing all around
Daisy petals overlay the ground

GOING UP, GOING DOWN..........

FRAZZLED heart struggles to be renown
Roller coasting..... with anxiety
Desiring Loves notability

This poem was written by 4 SUGAR BEAR on Sep 24, 2007.

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  1. Alaska says:

    fab! such a mix of emotions.

  2. Rick Brown says:

    Good poem. Yep, Love can be a roller coaster. But don't get off the ride 4 Sugar Bear if your heart is this big. Ride that amazing ride.