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~ I GAVE IN ~

When does ones heart

Begin to heal...

Ones smile

Become real...

When does ones pain

Soothe away...

Allowing new hope

For an awakening day...

Such grief stricken

Heart broken in two...

No mood for smiling

Fearing those days are through...

When does ones heart

Begin to mend...

Ones smile

Departing pretend...

When does ones life

Come anew...

Rejected from Love

Thought to have been true...

Such painful infliction

That stabs deep within...

Broken heart, trust, belief and smile

All because, I GAVE IN...

This poem was written by 4 SUGAR BEAR on Nov 27, 2007.

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  1. Rick Brown says:

    I really felt your pain on this one 4 Sugar Bear. I can really relate to this one. Love is not always a good feeling. Very emotional poem, I think it is Fantastic!

  2. 4 SUGAR BEAR says:

    Thanks R.B. for all your encouragment....~PEACE OUT