~ TRUE SERENE ~
How beautiful the sun does shine
As the morning dew...glistens upon an entwined vine
The slight breeze entertains, with its creative dance
Shadowed images of wonder...a flawless performance
An envisioned parade of palm branches, swaying to and fro
Watching as my Lord shines...on creation below
The creatures of the earth, rise with rejuvenation
With a gift of life...embracing the eternal invitation
The laughter and joy of care so free
Echoes...off the wings of such beauty
Crashing waves fills the air, surrounds sounds of a glorious band
A mesmerizing sparkle...gleams mosaic upon the shifting sand
Overgrown sheaths of grass, flirts amongst the weeds of sass
Peaceful is this enchanting scene...compliments of TRUE SERENE
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Written Summer of 2007
This poem was written by 4 SUGAR BEAR on Feb 18, 2008.
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This is beautiful.
I agree with Tony on this one...it flows so beautifully. You are so talented!
what a beautiful use of imagery
i love this alot
nice poem 4 SUGAR BEAR !
Nature does have it's beauty, Specially in the Fall. I love looking at the fall colors. Good work 4 Sugar Bear, Keep truckin'
I appreciate all the encouragements, each of you have shared. Thank you for taking the time to read and comment my work. ~PEACE OUT
WOW!!! Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem. Nature holds a place very dear to my heart. It is where I see God. It is where I find peace.
I hope you know how special you are :)
Thanks for putting such a nice comment on my poem.
It ment a lot.
the words are just put together so perfect
the flow is amazing
"Fo' Sho"
very good choice of words. i love every line!
Thats amazing... Great job!!