Rating: 4.0/5

~ UNFORESEEN NIGHT ~

One late eve

Out near the pond

Casting in the moonlight...

Catching a glimpse

Of passions eyes

Gleaming stars so bright...

Bobbing line

Baited hook

Anticipating a bite...

A nibble here

A nibble there

Reeling in with might...

Rocking boat

Surrounding steam

Holding on..reel tight...

Broken line

Sunken ship

Bit in the ass, an UNFORESEEN NIGHT...

This poem was written by 4 SUGAR BEAR on Mar 07, 2008.

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  1. Rick Brown says:

    Fishing is one relaxing sport, and can be exciting at times also. Great insight. Keep it up!

  2. sam says:

    This is really cool, and your really good at rhyming.