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Poetry Controversy

Good, in between, and bad

How good, in between and bad do you want it?

You are you as I am me

Let me do my work while you applause

That's if you're not a poet

Well, if you are

Welcome to our club

Until you are called out,

Sign in and remain calm

Otherwise you are them in our club

Be my guest, be my critic, you are snubbed

Like cigarette, we’ll be smoking

While you remain the stub

Disturbed. And will be extremely purged to the cur

And that’s my word.

This poem was written by THOMPSON OYONMI on Jun 29, 2008.

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  1. Milt Lemke, Jr. says:

    Your right about being in the "club." And believe me it's not an easy club to join! Great!

  2. jason says:

    wow. wheres the beat? 16 bars, herd? i guess this is the freedom of a forum.