I need constructive comments
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Hello
This is my first shot at creative writings and poetry. Please give me your comments, even constructive ones for I hope to improve on my poetry writing in the future. Thanks in advance.
http://www.authspot.com/Poetry/Hope-and-Love-Again.173809
Thanks in advance carpe diem!