Comments for poem: ~SHE'S THE ONE~

Comment by Rick Brown

Wed, 21 Nov 2007 16:34:57 -0800

FANTASTIC SUGAR BEAR! You really caught my attention, When you wrote "We both looked tempting hot,and a suprising note our clothes came off,NOT!" Remember, I do have a good imagination,(laugh)But, all in all it was very, very good. It tells me what kind of girl you really are, and what kind of life obstacles you are going through.

Comment by Robert Montufar

Sun, 27 Jan 2008 15:45:47 -0800

I really like this one for the same reasons that you are drawn to my works as well. It reminds me of a best friend who I have alot of Love for. Unfortunately, the Love that I would like to share is, to my indescribable disappointment, forbidden because she is already taken.

But in the end, whatever is meant to be shall be.

Comment by WILLIAM LOWERY

Wed, 20 Feb 2008 10:49:04 -0800

WOW YOU JUST DESCRIBED MY LIFE,EVERYTHING YOU WROTE IS HOW MY LIFE STARTED OUT WITH MY SOUL MATE.WE WERE SEPERATED FOR 14YRS AND NOW WE ARE BACK IN EACH OTHERS LIVES ONCE AGAIN.SHE HAS 3BOYS AND 2GIRLS I HAVE 1 GIRL.SHE'S A WIDOW AND I'M A WIDOW TOO.SHE HAS ALL WAYS BEEN THE ONE.THANKS FOR A GREAT AND WONDERFUL POEM.KEEP UP THE OOD WORK.

Comment by Jason none

Tue, 19 Aug 2008 12:51:21 -0700

it was real goiod i like it i wish i could right that long